Clusterfuck (western illustration/comic style)

First of all, I don't know what I'm doing really. I just trial and errored my way through dozens of variations of so many models I can't recall at this point. So best not to use it in anything commercial I guessI wanted western looking but not fully comic style look. Its like 90% there where I want it, but now matter what I tried I can't push it further. I can't get rid of the anime eyes on women and can't make the lineart more prominent - it would be perfect then.