blouse is more shiny, keep the style the same, the tie is longer and looks more like made out of latex, good anatomy, keep artstyle the same, more top heavy, her eyes are pink and have big glazed over irises, her expression is more goofy and giddy with half closed eyes, she is giggling, fix details on fingers and face, keep the background the same, the style of the background is very simple and blurry, she is the focus, her face looks more like Reze from Chainsaw Man